Story about a business theft was written well

Published 9:04 am Wednesday, March 18, 2009

My name is Abby leBrun from Albert Lea High School. I’m writing this for a class project, but I found an article in Feb. 24 newspaper that I would like to discuss. On the front page there is a story called, “Woman charged with stealing from biz,” and I would like to comment on how well that was written.

Your writer, Sarah Stultz, gave the people very nice details about what they should know about this crime. However, it would be nice to have something from her point of view. Do some digging on the story. But other than that, the information about the crime was excellent. I found my eye drawn to it once I saw the headline. It shows people from Albert Lea and other areas around here you do the crime you do the time. But thank you for your time. I appreciate you reading my comment.

Abby leBrun

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